100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week #51
The line was drawn the demands were set, there was no turning back. They came at us from all sides. Which way do we go? There is no one to turn to. We hid in alley ways. We ducked into the corner of the night. They kept coming. Who do you trust? They’re all in on it. Lies. How did it come to this. We will never give up. What will they try next? We’ll never know. Always be aware without fear. Fear will be our down fall. Who are they? What are they? They are called, THE ONE PERCENT.
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truthaboveallreligions 
I’m afraid already, even if they were 0.1% Scary. Are you one of them?
ventahl - July 25, 2012 at 4:16 pm |
Nicely done. The absence of detail makes it scarier still.
Sandra - July 26, 2012 at 1:59 am |
Interesting piece which leaves the reader wondering who they are and what they want…
annahalford (@anhalf) - July 26, 2012 at 6:15 am |
This is terrific — I have my own opinions, as I’m sure many do, but I love the ambivalence of the text, up to the last sentence. Beautiful!
judithatwood - July 26, 2012 at 1:17 pm |
The short, stark sentences made the action faster.
Let's CUT the Crap! - July 26, 2012 at 7:11 pm |
Scary, and I hope its less than 1% in reality!
Gilly Gee - July 29, 2012 at 9:04 am |